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    July 28

    disappoint.................................................a23


    Do you believe in the nobility of suicide? NOOOO !!


    Just one more time
    For the sake of sanity
    Tell me why
    Explain the gravity
    That drove you to this
    That brought you to this place
    That pushed you down
    Into the soil's embrace

    Give me the chance
    I was denied
    To sit and talk with you
    For one last time


    Did I disappoint you?
    Did I let you down?
    Did I stand on the shore
    And watch you as you drowned?
    Can you forgive me?
    I never knew
    The pain you carried
    Deep inside of you.


    I can't forget
    Having to see
    The words that knocked the wind
    Right out of me
    It's not enough
    I've come undone
    Trying to find sense
    Where there is none

    Just give me peace
    You owe me that
    To help ward off the fears
    I must combat


    Did I disappoint you?
    Did I let you down?
    Did I stand on the shore
    And watch you as you drowned?
    Can you forgive me?
    I never knew
    The pain you carried
    Deep inside of you.


    And so I ask
    For one more chance
    To understand
    This senseless circumstance
    Help me to see
    This through your eyes
    The reasons I've been trying
    To surmise

    Though you are gone
    I am still your son
    And Though your pain is over
    Mine has just begun


    Did I disappoint you?
    Did I let you down?
    Did I stand on the shore
    And watch you as you drowned?
    Can you forgive me?
    I never knew
    The pain you carried
    Deep inside of you.


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    Over the years I have known many lost souls who have taken their own lives, the last only five days ago at the age of 24. In trying to come to terms with such loss those left behind especially those closest to the deceased often feel that they should have forseen it and been able to prevent it. I now conclude that more often than not intervention would not make much difference as people believe what they want to and not what others do or say. As with most things only the individual can make the change and if they cannot find their way out of the darkness in their own minds they will take whatever option comforts them, even to the point of taking their own lives. 
    The poem is excellent but the truthful answer to the question will remain unanswered 
    Aug. 11
    Strong and touching words ..love your poems i do,
    July 29
    No namewrote:
    wonderfully powerful... xx Manda
    July 28

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